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schedule发表于 2012-02-18 10:57:00 visibility查看 229 chat_bubble回复 11
#1 楼主
lihua have a disabled leg that was hurt by accident,which makes his behavior strange.what’s worse,he is annoyed everyday because his fellow students make fun of him.unfortunately,he have difficulty in adapting to his disease at the start of having a 待续...
[『炎』知足VS墨水瓶于2012-2-18 11:05:57续贴]:
disease.in other words,lt is difficult for him to do something.for instance,playing basketball and football and so on.luckly,the doctor suggested that he should have a full of sleeping as well as do some special exercise.after several months,we all 待续...
[『炎』知足VS墨水瓶于2012-2-18 11:09:23续贴]:
congratulate him on recovering,last but not the last,he overcome the trouble which he meet with.
这篇是我写的,老师给了12分(15分制)

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Lv.1 韶华一笑间
2012-02-18 11:09:00 沙发
朋友 你认为楼主傻屄吗?
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Lv.1 韶华一笑间
2012-02-18 11:10:00 板凳
鄙视一楼!
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2012-02-18 11:14:00 地板
朋友认为是的……
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Lv.3 畅意三江水
2012-02-18 11:16:00 #5
丽华有残疾的腿,意外伤害,这使得他的行为strange.what的恶化,他懊恼,因为他的同学日常乐趣him.unfortunately,他困难适应在有adisease开始他的病。换句话说,这是他难以做something.for实例,打篮球和足球,这么on.luckly,医生建议他应该havea睡觉以及做一些特殊exercise.after的几个月,我们allcongratulate他收回,最后,但不是最后,他克服了麻烦,他会见。【谷歌翻译版权谷歌所有】楼主写的乱七八糟老师给你12分也给足你面子了……不堪入目……
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Lv.3 畅意三江水
2012-02-18 11:26:00 #6
除了句子稍微有点顺序其实的乱七八糟……楼主不信自己翻译……楼主老师难道不懂英语?这样也快满分?依我看顶破天也就4分……不知道楼主老师咋想的……
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Lv.3 畅意三江水
2012-02-18 11:40:00 #7
In addition to the sentence a little bit sequence of a mess ...... Ido not believe their own translation. Landlord teacher and not know English? So fast out? In my opinion the top dZi it... do not know the landlord teacher ye think...……
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2012-02-18 11:47:00 #8
呵呵。顶楼主。表示看不懂
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Lv.1 韶华一笑间
2012-02-18 11:52:00 #9
哥对此不发表任何意见!
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Lv.6 胸怀六国志
2012-02-18 12:12:00 #10
very good
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2012-02-18 12:55:00 #11
给7、8分
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Lv.1 韶华一笑间
2012-02-18 13:14:00 #12
呵呵,比我写的好……
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